I have three children, two stepchildren, and now three grandchildren. I have had a variety of jobs that would always end up going nowhere. So one day after my oldest two kids left home, I decided that today was the perfect time in my life to begin making permanent improvements. I took the step of visiting with Marty Kelly, one of EMCC's Financial Advisors and had my grant, my schedule, and was enrolled in EMCC, by the same day the following week.
It is said when everything comes together perfectly to allow you to work towards a certain plan or an idea, then it is truly a part of your destiny. Each semester there have been obstacles that presented themselves upon my scheduling of classes such as the timing, the distance, eligibility requirements; but somehow it all comes together so easily, it is a reminder of the fact that I am here because I am supposed to be.
Sure, that's exactly the tone and style--you've captured it perfectly.
ReplyDeleteOn the other hand, compare it to this:
ReplyDelete"I am a middle-aged woman back in school for her second semester. I grew sick and tired of seeing everyone around me getting a paid vacation. I WANT ONE. I figure 3 and a half more years of college and a couple more years in the work force and that paid vacation is mine and my husband better take me where I want to go."
I like the wise-ass, very much LC tone of number two, though I doubt it would work on the college website.